Wednesday, November 22, 2006

 

Chapter 4: Long Time, No Emos


( I'm so dumb, I just figured out how to post a picture. After trying for forever. Anyway, on with the story.)

"This is an awesome party!" Dawn (from Fireflight) said as she squirted a random person with soda from the can she had been energetically shaking. "Yeah," answered Wendy (also from Fireflight), "But where's Phee?" She asked, referring to Fireflight's drummer. "Probably being emo in a corner. Or just staying out of the line of fire." She laughed as another random person was brought down by her soda-spraying efforts. Another member of Fireflight, Justin, came over in his magical red cloak. (No seriously, he really had one on. In real life. It was scary.) He smiled. " Your skin is as soft as the pillows of the angels.Want some Mike and Ikes?" Dawn sprayed him. "Your magical self-esteem-boosting powers will die!" Justin smiled again. "But I have my magical cloak on. Your feared soda-spraying has no effect on me." Dawn frowned, and sprayed Wendy. A look of horror crossed Wendy's face, turning into rage. "You are SO going to regret that!" She lunged towards Dawn, who decided wisely to run. The many random people she had sprayed cheered.


Comments:
wow. your story thrives on violence.
 
soda spraying is not violence. and none of my characters died. and justin was encouraging people.
 
whatever, tyler came back. and is STILL sexy, thank you very much. and it still thrives on violence. Might i remind you of the jack sparrow incident?
 
He POKED you. You still hold it against him? He was just doing his job.
 
HE RIPPED MY SHIRT!!!!!!!!
 
yeah, yeah, your favorite one, I know, but you've gotta learn to forgive!
 
HE'S gotta learn not to rip people's favorite shirts AND to not make out with skanky wannabe-pirate women who ALREADY HAVE BOYFRIENDS AND ARE GOING TO BE KILLED AND/OR DIE OF ANOREXIA!!!!!!
 
She's going to be killed and die at the same time? Oh my. That is violent.
 
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